Comments on: Relax your Mind, Body and Soul

By: Big Daddy!!!

Big Daddy!!! — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 02:40:31 +0000

This poem would crack me up. I would love my husband even more if he gave this to me. For thinking of me and making me laugh. You remind me a lot of my boyfriend.

Cheers to you Big Daddy!

By: Nelly-The-Elephant

Nelly-The-Elephant — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 22:53:04 +0000

You might have an over active thyroid. Enjoy your skinnyness…it won't last as you get older!!!

By: Jesmelda Rose

Jesmelda Rose — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 19:04:32 +0000

I like it!
Okay here are some little tips.
in the beginning it says "Again, it was 3:45am on the dot and again, she had had the same terrible dream."
It doesn't sound write with the two "had"'s and take out one of the "again"
Repeats in the same sentence like that, a tootttalll no no…

a really like your use of detail, you could make the detail better and more rich if you add some of the 5 sense's into it. When a story has good use of the sense's they really bring my attention to them, and my creative writing teacher told me if we hand something in without any use's of the sense, we wont get a good grade since that is one of the major things that are looked for in good stories.

otherwise i really like it, So basically just fix up some of the wording and the detail (just a little on the detail) and your good to go.
i hope this helps.
GOOD LUCK!

By: bmudpies

bmudpies — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 12:11:03 +0000

Acid Raindrops by People under the stairs

By: sheene-never live life unnoticed

sheene-never live life unnoticed — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 10:15:18 +0000

How about 'Living Healthily'.

By: Lacey R

Lacey R — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 06:39:10 +0000

ONLY ABOUT 10-20% OF YOGA IS PHYSICAL THE REST IS MENTAL/SPIRITUAL. ITS ABOUT LEAVING YOUR EGO BEHIND MOVING FORWARD TO STUDY YOURSELF. ITS ABOUT SELF HEALING AND SELF REALIZATION!
WHAT YOU SEE IN THE WEST IS FAR AWAY FROM WHAT YOGA ACTUALL IS ALL ABOUT!
EVERY YOGA "MASTERS" STARTING HIS/HER OWN YOGA "STYLE"…
THE GREATEST JOKE, THEY HAVE EVEN PATENDED 150 YOGA POSTURES IN USA, UK AND OTHER COUNTRIES!!!
ATLAST… INDIAN GOVERNMENT NOW HAS TAKEN STEP TO PROTECT THIS INDIAN CULTURAL HERITAGE ALONG WITH AYURVEDA ETC AND PRESERVE FOR THE MANKIND TO BE USED BY EVERYONE AND MISUSED BY NONE.

By: mekiki13

mekiki13 — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 06:23:07 +0000

meditation, good for this song.

By: Ina

Ina — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 04:57:31 +0000

A mission statement is short and often one sentence and what you will use to reach "your goal".

Replace words like "I believe", "I want" with more positive statements. Like: I will assist my clients in improving their health and enhancing their well being in a safe and professional environment.

What massage therapy "is" doesn't belong in your mission statement. Save that for part of your marketing strategy.

You're on the right track though.

By: Matt

Matt — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 02:43:39 +0000

Whatever works for you. Listening to punk rock calms me down, so we all respond to things differently. You're on the right track, to work on the mind/body/soul thing, try meditation, guided imagery and mindfulness.

Mindfulness is when you focus totally on what you are doing in the moment, which would mean no music, no distraction. There is evidence that this is very beneficial to whole body/mind health.

By: Aleksandar

Aleksandar — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 01:34:52 +0000

time spent alone with a loved one is golden no mater how you spend it